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Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2016 8:53 pm
by crit32566
What do you think is better in a fiction novel? To see:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3


1. Through the Golden Door
2. The Problem with Kings
3. A Terrible Idea

This is just an example, but what do you think works better in a story?

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:15 am
by crit32856
I think chapter numbers alone might serve to help a reader bookmark where they are, but probably aren't even useful for that. And I guess they are good for teachers assigning homework.

Titles are better, in my opinion. But optional.

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2016 10:47 am
by crit19292
Breaking up your text into thematic chunks helps your readers. Few have time for reading through a novel (God bless those that do). Chapter breaks is a nice way of giving your reader a good place to pause, and an easy method of returning to the story. Numbering the chapters helps a person keep track of where to return to.

I have had editors that did not want titles. They just wanted chapter numbers. That aside, I use titles when I believe my Point of View would provide them. If I believe the PoV would say things like, "All right, this is the time I 'Ran Fast through Raisins,'" then I use titles. If I have a more matter-of-fact type of narrator, I just use the numbers.

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2016 6:59 pm
by crit32349
I think the choice is partly a matter of style and partly related to the needs of the story. Look at "Use of Weapons" by Iain M. Banks. That novel uses numbers, titles and Roman Numerals together. Once you read the story, the forward and reverse numbering starts to make sense. Numbering the chapters sequentially would have been a disaster, and titles-only would have offered little help or given away too much. To me it's a very elegant table of contents. In another novel, "The Player of Games," Banks uses sequential numbers and titles on the four chapters (more like sections, actually).

Here's the condensed ToC from "Use of Weapons".

1. The Good Soldier
[Chapters]: One, XIII, Two, XII, Three, XI, Four, X, Five
2. An Outing
[Chapters]: IX, Six, VIII, Seven, VII, Eight, VI, Nine, V
3. Remembrance
[Chapters]: Ten, IV, Eleven, III, Twelve, II, Thirteen, I, Fourteen

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2017 6:15 pm
by crit33075
When I write chapters i use titles to keep my thoughts on track, but chapter numbers seem to be a clean way to present once published. In the end, I think it should be up to the author on how they want to present it. I'm toying with the idea of both....

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2017 10:01 pm
by crit20540
Going back to the original list, I use

Chapter 1. Through the Golden Door
Chapter 2. The Problem with Kings
Chapter 3. A Terrible Idea

And, in addition, I have

Part I. The Egg that Didn't Want to be Eaten
Part II. A Chilly Reception in Hell.

So far, I haven't had to resort to adding Book 1. etc, but I wouldn't hesitate to--with added title, of course.

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Thu Apr 20, 2017 11:15 pm
by crit33324
I think both chapter numbers and chapter titles are equally reasonable choices. However, I personally prefer chapter titles. I believe that if chapters are well-named, they will stick with the reader better. Numbers don't stick at all.

Also, chapter names give an author a second chance at planting an opening hook. I like choosing tongue-in-cheek titles that can vaguely suggest what the chapter is about. My scifi novel (The Expanding Seas of Earth) has these (examples):

"Fight and Flight" - one key character struggles to escape an alien spacecraft rising out of the sea (and swallowing his ship), and is left bobbing in the ocean as it flies off.
"Who's on First" - my main character and her crew groggily awaken to discover they've been "sealed in" on their ship, but have no idea where they are or why - circumstances suggest they were hijacked by aliens.
"Hunter-Gatherers" - for the first time, the main characters have discovered a possible means to escape their captors.They scheme to "return the favor" - hijack the alien vessel that first hijacked them, and return to earth to warn humanity (i.e. become the predator).
"Braking and Entering" - Approaching the Kuiper Belt, they slow down and enter the Sol (Earth's) system. They orbit a small moon to practice using some of the technology they've found aboard the alien ship (they're gonna need it…but maybe not for what you think).

Okay, maybe not all that clever, but I think the readers can still make the connection between the titles and the action.Guess I'll find out.

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2017 6:22 am
by crit33524
It depends very much on the story. (I will say that I hate tables of contents that consist of nothing but Chapter 1, Chapter 2, etc. - but the objection is to the useless table of contents, not to the chapter breaks or labels.)

I tend to use chapter breaks for some sort of significant shift in the narration. And in such cases, the title can be used to communicate the nature and destination of the shift. For example, I have a short story up for critiquing this week that, in spite of being only 7,000 words, is in 9 chapters. Chapter titles specify the date and what part of the day it is - which in this case is necessary.

I strongly tend to not publish chapter numbers. But this is because I don't number things 1, 2, 3, 4. Instead I number them 10, 20, 30, 40. This is a habit I picked up very early in my career as a computer programmer, and the reason for it is that it makes inserting things a lot easier - when I'm done there might be chapter numbers 10, 15, 17, 20, 40 (with 30 having become 17). I suppose I could still name my chapters "Chapter 1" et cetera... but I don't.

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2017 3:19 pm
by crit33321
One of the biggest reasons I use chapter titles is to entice readers through the story. I try and relate the titles to the content of the scene to give a reader clues about what he can expect in the pages ahead.

Of course, I don't WANT a reader to ever have a reason for putting the story aside, not even to pee or eat! Personally, I love stories with chapters that end with a cliff-hanger, something that makes me say, "Crap! I can't stop reading now, but man I really need to get some sleep before work tomorrow."

So I try not to think of chapter breaks as a place where someone might stick a bookmark, but rather as natural shifts in time, place, POV, or a decision point that leads to a different goal.

Hope that helps,

Re: Chapter numbers or titles?

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2017 4:03 pm
by shahw1
Titles can offer another element to story or character, which is always a bonus. Where numbers offer a reader a way of keeping track of their progress. I don't mind titles or numbers, although if there are titles, I still want numbers.This is mostly so I can keep track of where I am on my Kindle. :)