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Critter Notices

ReAnimus Acquires Advent!

ReAnimus Press is pleased to announce the acquisition of the legendary Advent Publishers! Advent is now a subsidiary of ReAnimus Press, and we will continue to publish Advent's titles under the Advent name. Advent was founded in 1956 by Earl Kemp and others, and has published the likes of James Blish, Hal Clement, Robert Heinlein, Damon Knight, E.E. "Doc" Smith, and many others. Advent's high quality titles have won and been finalists for several Hugo Awards, such as The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction and Fantasy and Heinlein's Children. Watch this space for ebook and print editions of all of Advent's current titles!

Free Web Sites

Free web sites for authors (and others) are available at www.nyx.net.

New Book from a Critter Member

**NOW IN PRINT EDITION TOO!** Awesome new book, HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS, from a Critter member whose unearthed a shard of The Secret to becoming a pro writer. Really good piece of work. "...if you're at all concerned about story openings, you'd be nuts not to read what Qualkinbush has to say." —Wil McCarthy, author of BLOOM and THE COLLAPSIUM

The Sigil Trilogy

If you're looking for an amazing, WOW! science fiction story, check out THE SIGIL TRILOGY. This is — literally — one of the best science fiction novels I've ever read.

Network speeding up

I'm switching the connection over to a new, shiny 10X faster network because of all the load. There might be bits of downtime as your boxes learn new addresses and things. Should be brief. Let me know of any prolonged outages you see.

Preditors & Editors Changeover

With the very sad passing of Dave Kuzminski, who ran P&E, I've taken over the P&E duties. Lots of what I hope are improvements; check it out at pred-ed.com.

Critters Server is Dying has been Replaced

See important details here in my blog. Let me know if you find anything that isn't working right. (Manuscripts are now available for this week, FYI.)

Book Recommendation

THE SIGIL TRILOGY: The universe is dying from within... "Great stuff... Really enjoyed it." — SFWA Grandmaster Michael Moorcock

Announcing ReAnimus Press

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Weekly Notes


Notes for 17-Sep-2014...


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Woohoo!  Congratulations to...

	- T S. Foxe, whose (Critter'd) novel, "Methuin's Collapse" is now
	out from iBooks. {Thanks to the Critters who helped me see some
	of the folly in my endeavor but mostly for the encouragement to
	press on.  T S. Foxe}

	- Abra Staffin-Wiebe, whose short story, ""Reconnect"" is now
	out in the current issue of Odyssey Magazine.

	- Dom Dulley, who sold his (Critter'd) short story, "Matter over
	Mind" to Stupefying Stories.

	- Richard Zwicker, whose (Critter'd) short story, "The Robot
	of Dorian Gray" is now out in the current issue of Perihelion
	Science Fiction.


Please report your Woohoo!s via the www.critters.org/telldaworld.ht web page.

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This week's Most Productive Critter award, for 3 critiques (at time
of judging), averaging almost 4900 words each, goes to...

	Marc Vincenz

To redeem an MPC, visit:  www.critters.org/usempc.ht

Congratulations!  To everyone else -- Crit early and often!

(For an explanation of the MPC award, see the www.critters.org/award.ht page.)

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Recommended Reading...
One of the best writing books - Secrets from the 6-time Best Editor
Hugo Award Master, Ben Bova: THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS 
http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
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Critters Workshop
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This week we have... [get from http://www.critters.org/private/mss.php ]...
                                                 
     Title                      	Author
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Week of 17-Sep-2014 (Crits due 24-Sep-2014):
 F   These Unfleshed Bones. Chapters 1-4  [mpc] Russell Adams -#24085
 SF  Soul Mates                         Carl Alves -#24086
 SF  Geoclasm Chapter 0 -- Divisions    Sean Green -#24087
 F   Ringleader                         Jennifer Michaud -#24088
 SF  Maiden Voyage of the SS Heavenly Dreams  Christian Roberts -#24089
 SF  Nanocaust, Ch 1 _RFDR_             Levi Jacobs -#24090
 SF  The Ordeal, Chapters 7-9           Conrad Steenkamp -#24091
 H   The Beautiful Light                Filip Wiltgren -#24092
 SF  KL2                                Salvatore Lucido -#24093
 SF  The Mercy Hit                      Natalie Jubb -#24094
 SF  You Again                          Jason Boyd -#24095
 SF  Ronald Muff Climbs the Social Hierarchy  Michael Juby -#24096
 SF  The Citizens of Sol: Titanborn - Chapters 1-4  Rhett Bruno -#24097
 SF  The Reckoner                       Cameron Huntley -#24098
 F   Reversed                           Lori Phillips -#24099
 F   Swaged - Book 2 - World of Blood Series  Killion Slade -#24100
 SF  Broken Mirror                      Cody Sisco -#24101
 F   A Conspiracy of Ravens", Chapter 1 _Part 1_  Jason Richardson -#24102
 SF  Against All Odds                   A Wisham -#24103

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Recommended books on writing:

THE CRAFT OF WRITING AND SELLING SCIENCE FICTION by Ben Bova
	ReAnimus Press Store: http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1144
	Amazon: http://Amazon.com/dp/B006MAZPEI

HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SPECULATIVE FICTION OPENINGS By (Critter member) Robert Qualkinbush
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1184 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007O272ZI

STAYIN' ALIVE - A WRITER'S GUIDE by three-time SFWA President Norman Spinrad
	How things really work in the art and commerce of publishing
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1179 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007SIC4I8

EXPERIMENT PERILOUS: THE 'BUG JACK BARRON' PAPERS by Norman Spinrad
	(A 99cent essay on SF and writing)
	http://ReAnimus.com/store?item=1180 | http://Amazon.com/dp/B007MF3MS8
 
Because you might enjoy it... THE CURE FOR EVERYTHING by SEVERNA PARK
Nebula Award winner!
http://reanimus.com/store/?item=1354
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Pieces up for critique in other workshops...

In the lit workshop - http://critique.org/lit :
 L   Dave under a Pregnant Horse        Allan Parker -#24043

In the mystery workshop - http://critique.org/mystery :
 M   Ice Cream Man, Chap 12-13          Charles Puccia -#24063

In the nonfiction workshop - http://critique.org/nonfiction :
 NP  Holding Down the Fort Chapter 1    Briana -#20954

In the script workshop - http://critique.org/script :
 SC  Bounty Hunters                     Avant Hall -#23842

In the kids workshop - http://critique.org/kids :
 YA  Against All Odds                   A Wisham -#24064

In the western workshop - http://critique.org/western :
 W   The Things a Puncher Does For Money  Frank Coombs -#22499

In the romance workshop - http://critique.org/romance :
 R   Dustriel's Blessing Second Draft, Chapters 26-31  Melanie DeWitt -#23959

In the video workshop - http://critique.org/video :
 VS  The Gallery of Henri Beauchamp     Jay DeTalente -#21424

In the music workshop - http://critique.org/music :
 MP  The Shade Riders and Nocturnal Ned song  Beth Zurkowski -#21675

In the photo workshop - http://critique.org/photo :
 PH  Dry Mud and Cinder Cone            Bill Wight -#19627

In the art workshop - http://critique.org/art :
 AO  Wild White Horse                   Fran Eisemann -#21370

In the website workshop - http://critique.org/website :
 WW  Powerscript Website                Ronald Hurst -#22230

In the critters workshop - http://critique.org/critters :
 F   These Unfleshed Bones. Chapters 1-4  [mpc] Russell Adams -#24085
 SF  Soul Mates                         Carl Alves -#24086
 SF  Geoclasm Chapter 0 -- Divisions    Sean Green -#24087
 F   Ringleader                         Jennifer Michaud -#24088
 SF  Maiden Voyage of the SS Heavenly Dreams  Christian Roberts -#24089
 SF  Nanocaust, Ch 1 _RFDR_             Levi Jacobs -#24090
 SF  The Ordeal, Chapters 7-9           Conrad Steenkamp -#24091
 H   The Beautiful Light                Filip Wiltgren -#24092
 SF  KL2                                Salvatore Lucido -#24093
 SF  The Mercy Hit                      Natalie Jubb -#24094
 SF  You Again                          Jason Boyd -#24095
 SF  Ronald Muff Climbs the Social Hierarchy  Michael Juby -#24096
 SF  The Citizens of Sol: Titanborn - Chapters 1-4  Rhett Bruno -#24097
 SF  The Reckoner                       Cameron Huntley -#24098
 F   Reversed                           Lori Phillips -#24099
 F   Swaged - Book 2 - World of Blood Series  Killion Slade -#24100
 SF  Broken Mirror                      Cody Sisco -#24101
 F   A Conspiracy of Ravens", Chapter 1 _Part 1_  Jason Richardson -#24102
 SF  Against All Odds                   A Wisham -#24103
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You might also like... THE CRAFT OF WRITING SCIENCE FICTION THAT SELLS by BEN BOVA
Secrets from the 6-time BEST EDITOR Hugo Award Master!
http://reanimus.com/store/?item=1144

Standard notes:

HELP:
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are FAQs and a form to ask questions.

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HOW TO SEND CRITIQUES:
Remember to send the critiques directly to me, critters@critique.org, so
I can forward them to the authors _and_ give you credit for your effort.
Please send only one critique per mail message (makes it easier to
archive).  Please make sure the "#" symbol and manuscript number are in
the email Subject: line, like Subject: #1234.  (Conversely, if you want
ol' Aburt to personally read the message, i.e., it's _not_ a critique,
don't put a "#" in the subject or I won't see it.  Also -- put my current
anti-spam code word in there: see http://www.critters.org/antispam.ht .)

You may also send your critiques via http://www.critters.org/webcrit.ht .

Note that all critiques will be available to everyone to read the next Saturday.

DIPLOMACY:
Remember, authors and critiquers, we're all friends here.  Be polite.  Be
considerate.  Be tactful.  You can say you thought a story was drivel in a
courteous way.  Try to point out the good and the bad; offer alternatives
if you can.  Never, ever, attack the author -- only the story.  Authors:
Remember that some reviewers may lack tact.  Try to be understanding,
but if you get any that you feel are just plain mean-spirited, too short
to be of any use, or too "feel good," let me know and I'll withhold the
reviewer's "credit" for that story and/or cajole them into something
more insightful.  See http://www.critters.org/diplomacy.ht for more...

CRITIQUE LENGTH:
If you want to send a short critique that you know is too short for
credit (200 words or less of your own meaningful content) please put
"NC#" in the Subject (NC=No Credit, like Subject: NC#1234) -and- say
something like "not for credit" inside your critique.  (Remember also that
for MPC purposes, a critique must be 300 words or more.)

CHATTING:
Comments -other- than critiques (such as discussion of the critiques,
or Woohoo! announcements, or chit chat) should be posted to one of the
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(See the http://www.critters.org/newsgroups.ht web page for full info,
guidelines, etc.)  Don't post stories or critiques (mail those to
critters@critique.org).

QUOTING:
Please pare the ms. down if critiquing in-line (don't quote the whole ms.!).
Other format rules are at http://www.critters.org/format.ht .

EVERYTHING'S ON THE WEB:
Past reviews are on the web page.  The current week's manuscripts are
also there, as are prior mss. and even some rewrites.  There's a Master
Page Index (site map) with tons of links to common items.

AUTHORS:
Authors for this week -- if you aren't getting email'd critiques from
me (as they come in) within a couple days -- ask me and we can verify
I'm sending them to the correct address.  (Send me a phone# in case I
can't get email to you.)  Check the format of your story ASAP to make sure
it's all there and readable.

EMAIL ISSUES:
If you want to change your email address or preferences (# mss. emailed,
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point your browser to http://www.critters.org/admin.ht .  Please don't
ask me to do this by hand, it's quite a chore!  (E.g., if you're going
on vacation and want to suspend mail from me -- do this before/after
your trip.)

BACKUP SITE:
If you're unable to reach www.critters.org to get manuscripts, I've set up
an emergency backup site at http://backup.critters.org where you can get the
week's manuscripts (but not much of anything else :-).  Speaking of backups --
don't forget to back up your own manuscripts so you don't lose them!

QUITTING:
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for your choices.

DONATIONS:
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if you'd like to help out.

Because you might enjoy it... COSTIGAN S NEEDLE by JERRY SOHL
  
http://reanimus.com/store/?item=1359